I recently found out that the two scripts I entered into the BlueCat Screenplay competition, “Cliffs” and “World Domination: A Villain’s Tale” are quarter-finalists. Semi-Finalists are announced on August 1st. I also received coverage on both scripts. Below are some snippets from the coverage.
World Domination:
“Without a doubt, yours is one of the most original scripts that I’ve ever read. Spoofs on one thing or another are always fun, but without the ability to stand out, they can’t make it. You did a superb job in making this one entertaining and so intriguing that it grabs your audience‘s attention immediately.
The idea of a super-villain infiltrating the U.S. Presidency only to find it too evil and deplorable for even himself is very creative and an interesting concept to consider. I also liked how you gave the audience a peek at life as a “bad guy”; also, by comparing bad guys and good guys in a different style than is usually used, i.e. good guys always does good, and vice versa with the bad guy. It was risky, but I believe that you pulled it off.
Your characters were extremely well-developed and three-dimensional, from the leading characters to the secondary ones; every one of them was alive and sparked a feeling of identity (affection, hatred, hilarity, etc.) from the audience”
Cliffs:
“First of all, this is one of the best scripts that I’ve read so far. This script has unlimited potential; I can’t wait to see it on the big screen!
I really liked the message in your script: there are always second chances. Every now and then, people need a movie that they can watch and be transported to a utopian world where, no matter what happens in the beginning, the ending is always hopeful. Your script is a shining example of a perfect romantic comedy/life lessons drama. While there are countless good movies already in the Romantic Comedy/Drama genre, I think your script is unique and distinctive enough for it to become great. I think you blended the two genres very well.
I also really liked your writing style. The pace was kept steady throughout the screenplay, allowing it to speed up and slow down without dragging or becoming tedious.”
